Ecommerce
Paste a title, the bullets, an ad, or an influencer email on the homepage. That scan is US English store copy. The stiff opener below scores 70. The sentence that puts Black Friday, Christmas, and a named faith together scores 76. A bullet that names the motor scores 100.
Each line below is its own paste, in store copy. The first ring is that paste. The second ring is the score after every suggestion is accepted as written.
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Three moderate marks, 10 each. “Unlock” sits inside “that unlock growth”, so the line carries three marks. The rewrite still talks about analytics and growth.
Our late-November sale is open to shoppers in this market.
One serious mark, 24 points, so the score is 76. That is still the yellow band, and the ring says Machine tone, because red starts under 60. The mark itself is the cultural one. The suggestion keeps a sale and drops the holiday and the faith. If the offer really is a Christmas gift, read that sentence before it goes on the listing. It changes the offer.
How those points are set is on the product page. Homepage paste is the right scene for this copy. A German or French button is a different scan: choose the scene.
Same scene, US English store copy. A holiday by itself, a faith by itself, a spec bullet, and a short outreach email all stay at 100.
| Paste | Score | Marks |
|---|---|---|
| This Black Friday offer is 20% off through Sunday. | 100 | 0 |
| A Christmas gift for shoppers who want a smaller blender. | 100 | 0 |
| Our late-November sale is open to Muslim customers in this market. | 100 | 0 |
| Cuts prep time. The 600W motor handles frozen fruit. | 100 | 0 |
| Hi Sam, the blender is live on our store. Want a unit for a short video this week? | 100 | 0 |
The serious mark needs “Muslim” and either “Christmas” or “Black Friday” in the same sentence. Split across two sentences, or with either half missing, this list stays quiet. Jokes, slang, and other faiths are outside it. A score of 100 means this list is finished, which is a narrower claim than a native reader signing the page.
$0.33
11 words at $0.03
The suggestions already reach a clean score. Use them when the meaning can stay.
$0.39
13 words at $0.03
Pay for a read when the replacement changes the offer you meant to run.
$0.54
18 words at $0.03
This draft has no marks. There is nothing on this list to buy.
English is $0.03 a word. German, French, Spanish, and Japanese are on the price list, at $0.06. Free is 3,000 words in the current calendar month and, in the spec, only marks problems. Pro is $29 for 100,000 words, which is where the spec puts writing a suggestion back into the text. This demo still has Replace this on Free.
The report can send the draft to a reviewer after you see the marks. That order, and the fact that the pool lives in this browser, is on How it works.
A title, three bullets, and the email are three pastes. The homepage box is enough for all three.